Hi Lutfi; please check the second line of your poem; I think you need to add a "to be" there. Yet, the metaphor relates to the topic Please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother! -thanks-
First, I really like your blog name. 'Maze of Paradigm' is just WOW. Second, I like this poem. Always love your mother. Put her name in every single of your prayer. Always make her proud ^^
And I think this poem is related to your blog. Maze is so typical to Daedalus and Daedalus is one of Athena's son. Do you plan it? Do you like mythology things? I really like this mythology things and I know I need to stop now hehe :D
I tought no one will notice it. But you are something else. I like mythology too, because there are some secret and mystical aura surrounding them. It is really fun to know about myth once in a while. And I think I need to stop here too. I think we must chat once in a while about this matter.:) Well thanks for the comment.
Keep your spirit Brother :)
BalasHapusdo not make your mother sad.
god bless you :)
Hi Lutfi;
BalasHapusplease check the second line of your poem; I think you need to add a "to be" there.
Yet, the metaphor relates to the topic
Please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother!
-thanks-
First, I really like your blog name. 'Maze of Paradigm' is just WOW. Second, I like this poem. Always love your mother. Put her name in every single of your prayer. Always make her proud ^^
BalasHapusAnd I think this poem is related to your blog. Maze is so typical to Daedalus and Daedalus is one of Athena's son. Do you plan it? Do you like mythology things? I really like this mythology things and I know I need to stop now hehe :D
I tought no one will notice it. But you are something else. I like mythology too, because there are some secret and mystical aura surrounding them. It is really fun to know about myth once in a while. And I think I need to stop here too. I think we must chat once in a while about this matter.:)
BalasHapusWell thanks for the comment.
nice poem.. !! keep your mom like the goddess of Athena .. because only your mom can understand you brother.. :)
BalasHapusGod bless
nice your poem
BalasHapusI think, will be better if you put your mother's photo in your poem.. I hope, you're the best for your mom. stay healthy .. :)
BalasHapusplease recheck again with your poem I think something wrong with the second line. anyway nice poem. always love her :)
BalasHapus